Looking for feedback and collaborator (UPDATED!!)

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CHICK

• June 19, 2023 20:25
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Hi,

I am new to this, I've been learning for over a year now and I really would like some feedback on a track that I've creating for almost a year for a possible EP. Please take a listen and give some feedback thanks! 

 

https://soundcloud.com/girlnextdoor-160672057/glass-walls-6-19-23-update/s-lk2DrDVRhHM?si=8ae69849c90849a887a6580c4b000309&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

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  Dietrich Somms

  • April 27, 2023 20:48

  Yes i can listen and send you feed back

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  Dietrich Somms

  • April 27, 2023 21:13

  well, first are you planning on adding words? If not here, are some suggestions. First, I think it goes on for a little long, and honestly it seems to get a little repetitive. I do like the switch up that you have occasionally, such as the booming change at around 37 seconds and the synth that comes in at around 2:37. I personally get kind of bored with songs quickly, so a couple different instruments here and there and some unique motifs would be appreciated (by me at least). However, if you are gonna have lyrics/vocals, this could all change because they can add a lot and you don't want it to be too busy. Another tip that I have is adjusting the volume for different frequencies; sometimes it seems like the high ones can build up and be a bit too much, like around 54 seconds. Some things that I really liked are the production overall. It sounds really nice and spacious and the different instruments seem to be adjusted together well and make the song very sonorous. I like the reversed/inverted sound that makes it a little spooky and dark. Again, I really like your production and I'm actually impressed. Maybe a build up before 37 seconds could be nice. I love the synths and their melodies, and the bass is really cool. The ticking clock instrument at the beginning and through the piece is also very enjoyable. Some more distant, creepy, reverb-full sounding sounds could be interesting to add (like at 1:47). Overall, I hope you don't think I was trying to bring your song down and I really liked it. Hopefully this helps :)

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  CHICK

  • April 28, 2023 01:55

  Dietrich,

  Thank you so much for your honest feedback! I am planning to add vocals/lyrics, so I don't want to make the track busy. But I do still feel that it is repetitive at times and you gave me a good idea for the middle. I will definitely look into the volume situation lol! Thank you so much, this track is like means a lot to me and I think you were extremely helpful!!

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  Dietrich Somms

  • April 28, 2023 23:03

  Yeah no problem!!

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